Friday, 13 August 2021
The Present
Kia Orana, My name is Stephen and welcome to my blog if you are new.
If you are new to my blog then comment on one of my blog posts your choice.
Me and my class have been watching a clip called The Present and discribing what the charcters did in the story, after we talked about the clip and discribed the charcter then we made our own document about it.
Also here is a link to the Video
This is a cool story so thats why I posted this on my blog
Have you made something like this before?
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Kia Ora Stephen
ReplyDeleteIt's me Justus from Rm 7,
I like your writing about the present and how you described the boy was playing call of duty. This also reminds me of my writing about the present.
Was writing this story fun?
Bye
Justus🥥🥥
Hello Justus,
DeleteThanks you for commenting on my blog Justus, plus thanks for saying that you like the part when the boy was playing Call of Duty.
Yes I did really like writing this story.
Do you play Call of Duty probably not?
Blog you later
Bye
Kia ora Stephen, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. You did a great job of explaining what your blog post was about - ka pai!
ReplyDelete(Spelling correction: describe / describing.)
Phew, I'm glad the puppy was cared for in the end!
I look forward to seeing more of your work soon.
Kia ora Miss Whysall,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog post, well yeah I felt happy when the puppy was cared for and the end of the story too.
It was easy to write but the thing really liked doing was, describing the story from the video that we watched in class.
Blog you later.
Bye