
Exhausted, The man roamed up the mountain he was so tired but he kept on going. The sun was sparkling bright, his eyes were burning hot but he opened his bag and got his sunglasses out and put them on so his eyes weren't going to burn.
The sky was clear blue. He was incredibly excited to see the view from the top of the mountain.The wind was picking up, he was tired but he kept going and he saw the top of the mountain but he was so thirsty so he had a drink of water and had a rest before he decided to walk back down. He was surprised because he actually survived two night’s and two days. He was so happy that he achieved something that he always wanted to do. Yay!!!
Talofa Lava Stephen. I really love how you added a nice "ED" word at the start of your story. And how you used the word "roamed", you also used a brilliant way of explaining how tired the climber was! Well done!
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~Alofa